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What would have been a better plot for the Star Wars Sequel Trilogy?

Ok. Here we go. This is going to be hella long.I’m going to keep the main ideas of the 3 movies, but aside from that, this is essentially a complete rewrite.Star Wars Episode VII: Shadow of the EmpireThe movie will open with a scene of the Knights of Ren, who have red lightsabers, attacking a Republic library. This library is sort of like the Jedi Archives, except it has nothing to do with the Jedi.They slaughter the armed Republic guards with their lightsabers and limited use of the Force, and take something that has a photo of Starkiller Base on it. We have no idea what that is, though.Leia, who was always a politician, is the Supreme Chancellor. Paige Tico (Rose’s sis) is Leia’s personal adviser. She reports on the attack and Leia says, “I told you we should have taken the First Order more seriously.” It is revealed that the First Order is made up of the remnants of the Empire, and it is essentially a radical hate group trying to overthrow the New Republic. We don’t realize how powerful they are yet.Basically, the Empire was apparently creating Starkiller base before the Death Star 2.0, but their project was halted because most of the officers thought it was an unworthy investment. It was almost done, though. The First Order found it and started continuing the building process, and the New Republic knew about it, but they didn’t know what it was. Paige explains this to Leia, and she says that the Knights of Ren stole the plans for it from the archives. Leia goes pale and realizes that Starkiller Base might be completed by now.She orders immediate evacuation of all Republic planets. She gets on her own ship loaded with a few dozen officers, pilots, and politicians. They take off and land on D’Qar, a New Republic military base. The red lasers hit the Republic planets and Leia watches helplessly as tens of billions die. A few ships make it to D’Qar along with Leia and they start assembling the Resistance.We see Kylo Ren, but we don’t know who he is. He is talking to Hux about how Luke Skywalker is their only real threat and that they have to find him.We see Rey, and we get the same scenes of her being resourceful and surviving. We don’t see the scene of Poe and Kylo and the map. That’s dumb.Rey sees some aliens harassing a droid, but it’s not BB-8. It’s R2-D2. She frees him and she fixes him. He’s really beaten up. He tells her his story, about how Luke has exiled himself and how hes been wandering around and malfunctioning for over a decade. He says he needs to see a Leia Solo. “Never heard of her,” says Rey. Meanwhile, that big alien who Rey buys stuff from listens in and tells the First Order about this. They come hunting her down and she escapes in the Millenium Falcon with R2.No Finn, at least not yet. They get captured by Han. Han seems anxious about Leia, and he’s not a smuggler, that ruins his entire OT arc. He does this as a hobby but still spends lots of time with Leia. There’s no scene with Han explaining anything, and there’s no gang fight. They don’t open up R2’s map, but R2 and Han have a happy reunion. They speed off to Maz’s place, because Han thinks she might know where Leia is.Rey gets Anakin’s lightsaber, and no nonsense about Luke’s lightsaber. It’s Anakin’s! For heaven’s sake, Disney! The First Order attacks them, and the newly formed Resistance comes in and saves the day, but Rey gets captured. Also, Phasma kicks the hero’s asses before the Resistance comes. R2 and Han go back with the Resistance, and there is a beautiful scene with Han and Leia.Important: Rey does NOT escape using the Force. She has no idea whatsoever about how to use it, and I’m trying to avoid the whole Mary Sue thing. Instead, Finn frees her and they contact Han and Leia. Poe comes over in his X-Wing, and Rey and Finn commandeer a TIE fighter and Poe shows off his skills by protecting them as they fly back to base.We get to see lots of shadowy Snoke stuff, but make him scary, and make him look like a deadly Sith Lord.Rey, Han, Finn, and Chewbacca go to Starkiller Base to disable the shields. From here, everything plays out almost the same. Han dies, and Kylo Ren being Ben Solo is revealed. We focus more on Chewie and Kylo’s reactions, not Rey and Finn’s. Finn fights Phasma when they disable the shields and she beats him up like he’s nothing. Then Han and Rey chase her off. This is the beginning of a big arc for Finn.Rey and Finn fight Kylo Ren, but Kylo Ren immediately tosses Rey into a tree and Finn lasts about 12 seconds before Kylo Ren raises his lightsaber to stab him through. Rey tackles Finn, pushing him out of the way. She uses the Force with tons of effort to grab the lightsaber. This is the “Luke, use the Force” moment for Rey. She battles Kylo Ren, blocking many of his strikes. They are both surprised by her abilities, but soon, Kylo disarms her after a long, well-choreographed duel. Kylo Ren is going to kill her, but the destabilization of the planet knocks him off his feet, and Rey and Finn are able to escape.Afterwards, the Resistance reunites, rejoices, and mourns the loss of Han. R2 says that Luke won’t come back, so they make Rey go, so that even if he doesn’t come, she can be trained and she can be their savior. The movie ends with Rey handing the lightsaber to Luke.NOTES FOR THE SHADOW OF THE EMPIRE:BB-8 is essentially Poe’s sidekick. While he has a role in the movie, it’s not as big as the original.Paige Tico, Rose’s sister has a large role in this movie and we feel an emotional connection to her.Hux is introduced as the Tarkin of the sequels, and Phasma is the stormtrooper lieutenant the OT never had. Snoke is the Sidious, always in the shadows, pulling the strings.After-Credits Scene of Hux planning an attack/siege on D’Qar after receiving information from an unknown spy as to where the Resistance is.No Reylo nonsense, in fact, let this trilogy have no background romance. Reason: I have no idea how to navigate romance.Star Wars: Episode VIII: The Last JediThe movie starts with Rey meeting Luke. He takes the lightsaber and instead of tossing it away like a loser, he sighs in despair and says, “Leia sent you, didn’t she?” Rey nods, confused. Chewie comes with her to Luke’s hut and he does the same thing, except he tells him about Han and Luke falls back and puts his face in his hands. He says, “I knew,” in a grave whisper. “I knew he was in danger… I could’ve saved him… I’m so selfish.” We have no idea what he means, though, by the last bit.We Luke mourning, but then he gets on with it. He tells Rey, “I’ll train you. But you’re not learning how to fight.” She asks why, but he shuts her up.A FEW MONTHS LATERWe see the siege of D’Qar. Some dialogue tells us the siege has lasted months and the only reason they were still alive was because the only thing that could break through the shields was a dreadnought which was busy mopping up other rebellions.The dreadnought appears and they look at each other, knowing this means the last of their reinforcements are gone. They do the same evacuating stuff, and Poe once again is reckless. Rose’s sister dies, but this time it actually means something because we got to know her in Shadow of the Empire. Poe DOESN’T get demoted. Instead, Ackbar tells him, “You may have won us that battle, but you can’t sacrifice everyone for personal glory. Remember that the war is more important that the battle. Always put the Resistance before yourself.”They aren’t able to go to hyperspace because the First Order has a a disabler. That makes more sense, doesn’t it? There is no attack, so Leia doesn’t become Mary Poppins.Leia, Mon Mothma, and Ackbar know about the hyperspace disabler. So does Holdo. Mon Mothma and Ackbar tell Poe, and they come up with a plan. Apparently, they have a friend named DJ down on the nearby surface of Canto Bight, and he’s an amazing hacker. So Poe sends Finn, Rose, BB-8, and R2-D2 (this is a good time for the two droids to bond) to find him and disable the disabler. LOL. And please. No fuel nonsense.We see Holdo slipping into a dark corridor and contacting DJ, telling him to execute the plan. Then she talks to Hux, saiyng the Resistance is coming. This is where it is revealed that she is the spy who told the First Order about the Resistance’s base on D’Qar in the Episode 7 post-credits scene.On Canto Bight, the little team is told to go the biggest mansion in the city. They run into some trouble and flee to a house full of slaves and Rose insists on freeing them. She says that when she joined the Resistance she wanted to only to do what’s right. She then follows this up with, “We’re fighting to free the galaxy. What’s the point if we leave innocent children to suffer!?” This gets Finn, and they free the slaves, who in turn give them space horses to outrun their pursuers. Once they get to DJ, who lives in the mansion, they escape the planet.Cut to Rey training with Luke on Ach-To. We have no mirror dark cave blah blah blah scene. That was stupid, especially with JJ Abrams ruining that storyline. There’s a little bit of training scenes, and we see Rey really getting the hang of this whole Jedi stuff. As a bit of fan service, Luke tells her to lift his X-Wing out of the water. When she fails, he shows her and lifts it with the Force.Rey sees Kylo Ren with the Force Dyad, and he tells her about Luke. She doesn’t rage and attack an unarmed old man, but instead she confronts him and asks him what happens. She’s sympathetic and curious.He tells her that one night, he felt a great darkness surrounding him. He went to check on Ben, and saw that it was him. He was about to wake him, but then a voice told him to attack Ben. He didn’t want to, and he couldn’t explain it, but he tried to murder Ben. As soon as Ben blocks it, he realizes what he’s done and tries to stop it. But Ben attacks him, and we see flashbacks of a great duel. Luke was holding back considerably, he was weakened by an unknown force, and he was shocked. Also, he severely underestimated his nephew’s abilities.Ben defeated Luke, and then he told the rest of the Padawans that Luke betrayed them. Luke reveals that his former Padawans ARE the Knights of Ren. He says Ben must’ve not let them train anymore, so that they couldn’t achieve their full potential. Luke was injured so badly that the only way he was surviving was because of the strong aura of the Force around Ach-To. This was essentially the sacred Jedi Planet.Luke suddenly feels a disturbance in the Force and simply says, “They’re coming. Snoke. And… and Ben.” When the giant transport arrives, Snoke and Kylo Ren step out, eyes blazing in triumph. Luke tells Rey to take off, because he can’t fight both Snoke and Ren. As Luke thought, Kylo Ren follows her off the planet.Luke and Snoke. Face-to-face. Luke crushes the transport with one wave of the Force, killing dozens of stormtroopers. “Just you and me.” And so, the most epic lightsaber duel of all time begins. The full power of Grandmaster Luke Skywalker vs. Supreme Leader Snoke. No cuts, just a clean lightsaber duel. Lot’s of Force using, maybe Force Lightning, plenty of telekinesis, and maybe some really cool Force feats no one has ever seen before.As they fight, Luke realizes that it was Snoke who made him attack Ben. It was Snoke who turned Ben. And then Snoke revealed his true identity: Darth Plagueis the Wise.Plagueis learned about Luke’s weakness and led Luke towards his other transport, which had arrived as soon as the first was destroyed. They come inside and the door zooms shut, giving them a lot of space to continue to fight.All to late, Luke realizes what has happened. He defeats Snoke, slicing off his leg and slamming him into a wall. He takes his lightsaber. Luke then tries cutting through the door. But they’re already thousands of yards off the ground. They enter hyperspace and Luke knows he is doomed.Snoke tells Luke about how after Palpatine tried to kill him, he survived, unknown to the great Sith Lord. During the days of the Empire, Plagueis plotted revenge and aided the Rebellion with his resources and money. Towards the end of the war, he confronted Sidious himself. However, Snoke was maimed and dominated. That’s how he got his scars.Snoke goes to the medical room to get a new leg. Luke Jedi mind tricks a trooper guard and he escapes with an escape pod, after they get out of hyperspace. Knowing that even if he goes back to Ach-To, he will die, he reaches out to Leia and she tells him to come back. He says he’s sorry. She forgives him.Back with Finn and Rose, DJ gets them past the defenses and onto the ship. He betrays them and it turns out he is a spy for the First Order, working with Holdo. They are set up for execution.Rey is chased by Kylo Ren and three other TIEs. She has an idea and allows herself to be captured. He takes her to Snoke’s throne room. Snoke is already there. We get the whole scene, but the lightsaber is NOT destroyed. That can happen in Episode IX.Phasma asks Finn if he has any final words. Finn stands up, looks at the legions of troopers and says, “Come my brothers! We are not just slaves of the foul First Order. We are living beings! We have rights! Rise up! Help me. Destroy the tyranny of the First Order. Take off your helmets. We are all more than our designated numbers!”The legions shift uncomfortably. Then one trooper takes off his helmet. Another follows. Soon, about a third of the troopers are on Finn’s side. Phasma, who was staring in shock, orders the loyal ones to fire on the traitors. A big Stormtrooper Civil War ensues. Finn and Rose try to get away, but Phasma stops them. Finn tells Rose to put detonators in the core of the ship, and she runs of to do that.Now we get a nice Finn-Phasma confrontation. They fight, and Finn gets her to a stalemate. Phasma escapes because she heard what he said to Rose, and the loyal stormtroopers slaughter the traitors, and a few escape with Finn and Rose and BB and R2.Rey escapes the ship as well. She is someone; Ren doesn’t say she’s nobody. I’m planning on making her a Skywalker, but that will be revealed in the next movie. Kylo Ren senses something with the Force and escapes with Hux to another ship. Our surviving heroes go to Crait and the First Order flagship is blown up.The Battle of Crait ensues. Rey comes, but is unable to shoot down the AT-ATs or the cannon. When they charge the cannon, Rose is the one who sacrifices herself, pushing Finn out of the way and doing the good deed herself, leaving Finn shocked and sad. They retreat into the bunker and Luke Skywalker himself arrives. He has a heartfelt but hasty reunion with his beloved sister and he goes out to face the walkers. The last thing he said to her was, “You have to tell her.” Leia looks down but says nothing.Kylo Ren orders them to fire. He rolls out of the way and crushes all but one of the walkers with the Force, leaving his nephew alive. Kylo Ren goes out to face him. There is a quick 1 minute duel. Luke is clearly on the defense, not wanting to kill Kylo. However, unlike last time, Luke is going all out in his defense.Luke says, “My time has come, Ben. Know that I will always love you, as will your mother.” Kylo Ren, filled with rage, shouts back.“When I have killed you, I will have killed the last Jedi!”“Well, then, I can’t let that happen, can I?” *Cue the Force Theme*“And I will not be the last Jedi,” *Cue the Force Theme* He pushes as hard as he can with the Force and Kylo Ren is sent tumbling back into the last walker. Luke crosses his legs, closes his eyes, and levitates for a moment. Then he opens them one last time, seeing the binary sunset of Crait. (I decided that there is one) Satisfied, he drifts off into the Force.The rest of the Resistance escapes through the back way, and Rey helps them. This time, when Rey lifts the rocks, she does it a little at a time and it makes sense, because she had a few months of training, not a few days. She still struggles, making her more human.The few dozen or so surviving members of the Resistance board the Millenium Falcon and two other ships. Rey meets Poe, but they aren’t happy. They just nod at each other with respect, having both heard of each others’ heroics. Leia says that they’ll travel around the galaxy and look for help. They agree on this. In the real movie, they were happy. You just lost hundreds of lives! How are you glad??NOTES FOR THE LAST JEDI:Rey is clearly Poe’s personal droid. He does not accompany Rey to Ach-To, R2 does.Hint at Rey being a Skywalker. I don’t how to do that. Just do it.Post-Credits scene with Rey building a blue lightsaber. Remember Leia’s lightsaber? I want hers to look like that. After, we see Kylo Ren training and he unleashes a blast of Sith Lightning.Make sure Rey struggles a lot. Also, during the original, she was angry and raged a lot. Make her calm down and look like a Jedi and not a Sith.The surviving Resistance members are Leia, the main three, Ackbar, Leia, Mothma, and a bunch of other random people.Despite it being a nice addition, no Force Dyad. Just takes too much screentime.Make sure Rey recovers Luke’s lightsaber.Star Wars: Episode IX: Voices of the PastMovie starts about 2 1/2 years after The Last Jedi. Opening scene is of Kylo Ren on the new First Order flagship. He hears a voice inside his head and looks around, but no one else can hear it. Hux and others give him strange looks.The voice is that of Sidious, Vader, Maul, and other Sith Lords of the past. They are telling him to go to Exegol, the sacred Sith planet and if he is able to find it, then it means he is a true Sith. He closes his eyes for a moment and enters some coordinates into the ship’s navigation system. He tells Hux to go to hyperspace, who obeys.Back at the Resistance base, we get a nice shot of Rey training under the guidance of Leia. Same training scene, and this time her newfound powers are justified. In the real timeline, she got only a year of training and became extremely powerful. In this one, she gets 3 years.Cut back to Kylo Ren. They appear out of hyperspace, and Ren takes a personal shuttle down to the Sith planet. He hears voices, much more pronounced. They say, “You have found Exegol. Now, in order to exterminate the foolish JEDI from this galaxy, we shall grant you the ancient Sith starfleet.”Ren watches in awe as tens of thousands of star destroyers erupt from beneath the ice. “From now, you shall be known as Darth Calam.” No need to exaggerate on that, and we cut back to the Resistance.We see Finn and Poe and BB-8 and R2 on the Millenium Falcon, receiving the stuff from the spy. Everything goes the same, but NO LIGHTSPEED SKIPPING. That is the dumbest thing ever! It ruins the iconic “calculating jump to lightspeed” moment. And it makes no sense.They get back to the Resistance base, but instead of bickering with him, Rey tells Poe she’s glad they are safe. We need to establish a connection between them. As the Resistance gathers around to hear the news, Leia reads it out to them.“Kylo Ren found a planet. I don’t know how, but there is an enormous fleet there. Hundreds of times bigger than anything you can ever imagine. He kept muttering something about an Exegol, so you need to find that planet and stop those Star Destroyers from deploying. They’re kind of rusty, and we’re working on them now. But hurry,” he finishes. The entire crowd mutters and looks scared.Rey goes to the forest and talks with the Force ghosts of Luke and Yoda. Leia comes too. “Disturbing this is,” says Yoda. Luke says that Exegol is the sacred Sith planet and it is Ach-To’s counterpart. Apparently it is nearly impossible to defeat a Sith there, as they can draw upon the power of their predecessors.Yoda explains that the only way to find that planet and destroy the starfleet is to find the Sith Wayfinder. Luke says that he once went looking for it, and his trail went cold on Pasanna. No nonsense about the bounty hunter or Lando. He was alone.They regroup and Leia tells them the plan. She says they have to take out the Core Planets before the starfleet is deployed. “We’ll send our entire force to Coruscant. Meanwhile, Rey, Finn, Chewie, Jannah, 3PO, R2, BB-8, and Poe will go find Exegol. They’ll meet an old friend of mine at Pasanna. And I’ll get Maz to come as well. She has good contacts. We’ll rally forces around the galaxy and take Coruscant.” Jannah is one of the stormtroopers who escaped with Finn.Someone says that they’ll need Poe, but Poe says that they will have help. They go to Pasanna and meet Lando. The weird alien is not going to ask Rey who she is. Ren does not get Rey’s necklace and they are left alone. They get sucked into quicksand, but Rey doesn’t heal the snake. It doesn’t exist. They get the dagger and speed off to Kijimi to decrypt it.However, Lando decides to contact his fellow bounty hunters and other friends to help Leia in the attack on Coruscant. Also, Chewie doesn’t fake-die. He instead goes with Lando, his old buddy.Kylo Ren uses the Force to figure out where Rey is. They go to Kijimi and meet Zorii Bliss. She agrees to help them, and they are about to get to the workshop when Rey drops the dagger. A trooper picks it up and they notice it’s gone so they go up to the star destroyer.The trooper gives it to Ren, and he mutters to himself, “So that’s what they’re after…”We get some nice hallway battle scenes between Finn, Poe, Jannah, Zorii, and the troopers. Rey finds the dagger and meets up with the others. The little team meets Pryde, the older, more conservative general. He tells them that he is the spy and that he doesn’t approve of Hux and Kylo Ren. They tell him that since he is a senior officer, he should be able to spread the First Order forces thin across the galaxy to aid the Resistance attack. He agrees.Rey finds the dagger and is faced by Kylo Ren as the team escapes the ship. They duel for a couple seconds, and as Rey pushes him back and escapes, he yells after her.“Do you know how I tracked you here? It’s because you’re my sister!” Then they escape with Zorii Bliss. Rey contacts Leia and angrily asks her to explain. Leia gives her a weary look, as if she was expecting this. She told Rey that one of Snoke’s men had kidnapped her, but apparently decided to not give her to Snoke. Instead, he dropped her on Jakku and made it look like she escaped.“Why didn’t you find me? You could have devoted the full resources of the Republic, but you didn’t!” Leia says that she felt something in the Force telling her not to. Rey gets totally pissed and says as soon as she finds that Wayfinder, she’s done.On the Falcon, Zorii wipes 3PO’s memory and they go to Kef Bir. R2 doesn’t restore the memory. And no “Taking one last look at my friends.” That was dumb, considering the fact that Rey, Poe, and Finn treat him like garbage.Leia and her small fleet arrive at Coruscant. Suddenly, Lando and a few other ships arrive, about 10–15 small ones. They attack Coruscant, which is guarded by only three Star Destroyers. Many citizens cheer and join the battle. It’s a long, half hour battle, but the Resistance comes out on top.On Kef Bir, everything plays out similarly. No rebel stormtroopers, but Rey charges into the waves. She finds the Wayfinder, but it turns out it won’t activate until touched by a Sith. She senses Ren coming and quickly puts it where he will step. Ren finds it and picks it up.Triumphant, Rey pulls the activated device into her hand with the Force just as Finn comes. He takes it from her, and Kylo attacks him, but Rey defends him. They engage each other and we get the same epic duel with Rey being nice and calm. She blocks all of Ren’s strikes.A little Force using here and there, but mostly lightsaber centered fight. Rey seems to be at a stalemate, and Finn tells the others about her situation. They fly the ship over and Rey escapes. With the Wayfinder.Rey keeps true to her word and goes to Ach-To in an escape pod, isolating herself like Luke did. Poe wants to go after her, but Finn stops him, saying that she has to be able to make her own choices. Poe gets mad and says that the entire galaxy was at stake. They start arguing, but suddenly R2 tells them to strap in, and that they are going to Exegol. BB-8 inserts the coordinates and they launch into hyperspace, with C-3PO telling Leia the location.Cut to the First Order flagship. Hux says that there is a traitor who lost them the Battle of Coruscant 2.0. Without further word, he grabs a blaster and shoots Pryde three times, who collapses, dead. “Set course to Exegol. It’s time to finally eradicate the Resistance.”On Ach-To, Rey burns her escape pod and throws the lightsaber in. She hears Anakin’s Force ghost saying that that is no way to treat a Jedi’s weapon. She brings it out and he gives her a speech. He says that he was the Chosen One to destroy the greatest Sith ever. But he said that there is no good without evil, so it came back. He says that evil is eternal, but so is good. Then Luke comes in tells her to lift the X-Wing. I don’t want ghosts to have physical interaction so… yeah. Rey goes to Exegol.Kijimi isn’t blown up. There is no Death Star Destroyer. Only a fleet of hundreds of thosuands of normal Star Destroyers.On the Sith planet, the large Resistance fleet arrives. They commandeered some Star Destroyers, so they are pretty powerful. But when compared to the Sith starfleet… it’s David vs. Goliath. And David doesn’t have his slingshot.The ships are in space, gathered in the upper atmosphere and directly outside it. It’s Star Wars, so I don’t think there’s a point in having the final battle grounded.Then Leia starts mediating, and she says that since the fleet was built on the power of the Sith, they are tied to Exegol. However, Kylo Ren broke this connection, and created a tower that would keep the ships intact off Exegol. “We need to destroy those towers. So they send their three largest transports to attack the force down there, with Finn leading the way. They are met by the 12 Knights of Ren, Captain Phasma, and a battalion of stormtroopers (which, keep in mind, is about 500).The Resistance gets stomped. Then, a few dozen star destroyers arrive. This is the First Order’s fleet. Now they are getting completely swamped. Hux’s command ship, which is like the Supremacy on steroids, has gun turrets all over its boomerang shape and is firing them all at once.Suddenly, the Millenium Falcon appears out of hyperspace with Chewie and Lando on it. A sqaud of Rebellion-era X-Wings appear including Rey. Then Y-Wings and B-Wings. Some more iconic ships, plus some that we have never seen before. Thousands of ships arrive, and the numbers are equal.Some land, some join the battle. We see bounty hunters and Mandalorians joining the battle. Jannah asks Finn why they joined, and he says that the First Order threatened to shut down the galaxy’s crime system.Now we see Rey landing and going into the Sith Temple. She confronts Kylo Ren and ignites her lightsaber, but he says that there is no need for that. “I just want to talk.” Rey puts it down. She asks why he wants this.“I just want peace. I believe that the only way to rid the galaxy of conflict and crime is to establish complete military control. Just look at the two Republics. They failed. Miserably.”“If you wanted peace, you wouldn’t have blown up 5 planets.”“That was… Hux’s doing. I will deal with him myself, after the Resistance is eradicated.”“There’s something else, isn’t there?” Ren pauses, then says,“My mother abandoned me. My father abandoned me. And my uncle abandoned me. The Jedi Order is so flawed… I want revenge. That’s my first priority: to wipe out the Jedi forever. And… you should feel the same way. Our parents abandoned both of us. Join me, and we can have revenge!”Cut to the ground battle, with Finn fighting Phasma. It’s intense. But Finn is losing. Meanwhile, the Knights of Ren are more than a match for the Mandalorians. And the troopers are holding their own against the rebels. Leia comes down and rushes to the temple.Up in space, the Resistance is still losing. It’s close, but the Supremacy 2.0 is single-handedly mopping up dozens of Resistance ships at a time. Suddenly, a dozen TIEs attack the Mon Calamari Resistance capital ship. Mon Mothma, Admiral Ackbar, and dozens of other leaders are on the ship.Pew pew pew! Pew pew pew! The Mon Calamari cruiser is damaged severely. It starts falling to Exegol, with the escape pods destroyed. As it goes down, Ackbar looks up and whispers, “Long live the Resistance,” and then they die.Somber music plays. Poe looks at the wreck, and realizes what he has to do. He hears the words of Ackbar in his head. “Remember to always put the Resistance before yourself.” Without another thought, Poe puts his head, closes his eyes, and crashes his X-Wing straight into the bridge of the Supremacy. The last thing Hux sees before he dies is a determined pilot on a suicide mission to save his family.Depressing music plays as Finn looks in horror. Rey looks shocked, as they both felt it in the Force. Distracted, Finn gets knocked backward into a wall with the electro-thingy that Phasma uses. Rey looks in rage at Kylo, and, using this to his advantage, Ren blasts her with Sith lightning. She screams in pain and looks at him with seething eyes.She attacks him, fully tapping into her dark side and a theme similar to Battle of the Heroes plays as they fight to the death.The tide is turning in the Resistance’s favor, at least in the space battle. The First Order fleet has been completely wiped out, and the Sith Fleet numbers are dwindling. On the ground, Finn looks at Phasma with weary eyes. His electric thingy was knocked away, and Phasma is about to strike his face.The Force theme plays as he pushes Phasma back with the Force, into the wall of the tower. She slowly gets up as Finn uses all of his strength to slam his staff into her helmet. It clatters away as she collapses, dead. We see a glimpse of her face, her unseeing eyes. Then the scene cuts to Rey vs. Darth Calam.Epic duel. Final battle. Two dark side users unleashing their full strength on each other. Rey gets the upper hand and disarms Kylo. Then she prepares to stab him through when Leia arrives. She blocks her blade with the Force. Kylo Ren shoves both of them into giant pillars. Rey prepares to get up, but she hears a voice. That of Anakin. “Rey, remember who you are.”Shocked, she looks around. Then Luke’s voice. “Lead us.” And then every Jedi of the past reaches out to her, helping her, guiding her. Ahoska, Mace, Yoda. Luke, Anakin, Obi-Wan. Plo, Shaak Ti, Qui-Gon, Ki-Adi Mundi, everyone. Darth Calam hears it too. He looks at his trembling hands, just like Luke did. Then he stands up and says, “I’m sorry.”Suddenly, he cries out in pain. Rey rushes to him, but he is rolling on the floor, clearly in agonizing pain.A sinister voice bellows, “YOU DARE COME TO THE SITH PLANET, PLEDGE YOURSELF TO US, AND NOW YOU BETRAY US? YOU WERE THE CHOSEN ONE! YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO DESTROY THE JEDI, NOT JOIN THEM! FOR THIS YOU SHALL PAY…. WITH YOUR LIFE!”Leia stumbles over. She places her hand on Ben’s heart and gasps. He’s dying, and she transfers her life essence to her, sacrificing her life for him. Rey realizes what she’s doing says no, but Leia finishes. She collapses and feels the full wrath of the Sith, of the dark side.She looks at Rey and Ben. “I wasn’t the best mother… I hope this makes up for it.”“It does,” whispers Rey, and Leia disappears into the Force.Aftermath…. we see First Order ships falling across the galaxy, and then Ben, Finn, and Rey are talking about a new Jedi Order. They talk about voluntary recruitment and less strict ideals, and then for the final shot, we see Rey going to Tatooine.She takes Anakin and Luke’s lightsabers and bury them in the sand, enraging the Force ghost of Anakin and bringing bad luck upon Rey. Just kidding. She does the whole binary sunset scene and then gets onto the Falcon, where Ben, Finn, Chewie, Lando, C-3PO, R2, and BB-8 are waiting.For the final shot of the monumental Star Wars saga, we see the Millenium Falcon shooting off to hyperspace into the unknown.NOTES FOR VOICES OF THE PAST:Palpatine is not interesting without Anakin. So I didn’t bring him back.Rey being a Skywalker is better because it’s the “Skywalker Saga”.With Kylo Ren being more of a smypathetic villain, it puts him in the same tier as Thrawn, making him scary while also making you want to root for him,Darth Calam, I think was a good idea because Kylo Ren is a made-up name. I wanted him to be a Sith, so I gave him a Darth name. Calam comes from Calamity.I know Carrie Fisher died (R.I.P), and that made it hard to film Leia, but in my version, she’s a main character. That’s a little difficult.As much as we all loved Ben’s memory of Han, I couldn’t fit in in there, just like the Dyad.Alright. That’s it. If you read all the way, then…. wow.Sorry for making it so long.Have a great day,~𝕋𝕙𝕖 ℚ𝕦𝕠𝕣𝕒𝕟 𝔾𝕒𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣~

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